ext_24250 ([identity profile] nightrider101.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dominique012 2007-12-14 09:11 pm (UTC)

Awww! *applaudes* This is just perfect! I haven't read any of your work before and obviously I've been missing out! Naturally I want the three of them shamelessly together, but you made this believable. :) They were all definitely brilliant too!

Jack leaned back in his chair, laughing. Nothing changed. Everything changed. He couldn't work it out. And when he was with them, he just didn't care.

You came up with some lines like the sentence above. The effect the three of them have on each other was palpable with this story. Thank you so much!

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